flowing down the gutter / heading for the drain
but I want to rise again / to go up
so that I can fall / again
my favorite part / of the cycle
I will never reach / the stars
but up I will go / and far
watch me
/ / /
This poem written to the prompt for Quadrille 79 at dVerse.
Rushing water is so much fun to watch!
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Yes! and the sound!
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I like this poem from the rain’s point of view. What an amazing journey it makes. Nice to think about.
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Thank you – that’s what I was going for.
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Rain is part of such an amazing cycle… but somewhere there is also the spider climbing up again.
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Yes, you’re right – the spider too. (smiling)
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I like the eagerness to fall again.
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Thank you – I wanted to play with both up and down.
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How wonderful. Oh, to be a raindrop, falling as a star.
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De, thank you! I appreciate your kind words – and the excellent prompt.
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Beautifully said, I love the shape-shifting journey of water 🙂💦
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Thank you. I never thought of it as shape-shifting – I like it!
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Another of life’s cycles–I like the raindrop’s view. 🙂
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Thank you.
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I love the encouragement in this. We are all like rain.
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Thank you for your kind words.
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A calming meditation, well done.
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Thank you.
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