What is a diamond
at night?
What of this barrier?
Will anyone see us cross it?
How beautiful
the sound of the water falling
How wonderful
the feel of the swings
suspended in air
filled with love and laughter
I’ll give her the ring
in the morning
/ / /
This poem was written in response to the night poem prompt at Poetic Asides. I also incorporated some words (diamond, barrier, waterfall, swing, and suspend) from Wordle 155 at The Sunday Whirl.
Advertisements
Love the short bursts of detail that lead to the ending, which then points back to the beginning. The wholeness of the completed circle is very satisfying,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2014/04/07/the-oh-of-pleasure/