Mid-morning,
and my son is ill.
The sun is
too bright for
me on this day; I want fog
to soften the light.
/ / /
This poem, a shadorma, started out as a haiku/senyru, but just wouldn’t work. I had to expand it out to a slightly longer form.
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lovely, wanting fog to soften the light.
Susan, thank you.
Richard
It is hard to restrict thoughts when our children are sick. Your concern shows in every word. And how right you are, bright days feel a bit wrong when someone is ill. I hope he feels better soon.I
Teri, thank you. He is feeling much better now, thank you. It’s just the worst feeling when one of my boys is sick. I appreciate your comments.
Richard