slender crescent moon-
not quite white in eastern sky
near the horizon
/ / /
This haiku was written in response to the white prompt at Haiku Heights.
Sadly Waiting for Recess
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slender crescent moon-
not quite white in eastern sky
near the horizon
/ / /
This haiku was written in response to the white prompt at Haiku Heights.
Sadly Waiting for Recess 
I love the sound of “slender crescent moon.” I can picture it very well.
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lovely haiku ~ well done ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
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struggle not evident – a happy haiku.
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moon haiku…very nice take on white… or not quite white…
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Nice haiku well composed on the prompt.
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You’re right…the moon is not QUITE white; but definitely close enough!
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I found “white” difficult to work with. You slid “white” quite nicely into that slice of moon. 🙂
“Hungry Sunrise Fire & White Bird”
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Very nice, Richard. I thought the phrase “slender crescent moon” was very elegant somehow.
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I saw this manifestation of Luna hanging over Montana yesterday on my way to work. Excellent description, Richard.
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A moon haiku!
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