natural harbor-
the bay, an estuary
where the boats can sigh
/ / /
I didn’t want to
harbor such thoughts in my heart-
shouldn’t watch those films
/ / /
A haiku and senryu for the harbor prompt at Haiku Heights.
natural harbor-
the bay, an estuary
where the boats can sigh
/ / /
I didn’t want to
harbor such thoughts in my heart-
shouldn’t watch those films
/ / /
A haiku and senryu for the harbor prompt at Haiku Heights.
I love how you used ‘harbor’ in two different ways!
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I enjoyed these haiku. Both so different and expressive.
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Great haiku, love the first one!
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“where boats can sigh” … what an image!
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Lovely haiku. 🙂
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I believe those boats are sighing for the open water…
Harbor No Ill Will
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Ah, yes…the boats can sigh….they can rest, protected, before returning to the sea.
Lovely haiku, both.
Paula
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Thank you all for your comments – such kind words. I’m partial to that first one myself.
Richard
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